Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

04 June 2012

Hashtag AmWriting

I promised a blog...last week.

I am posting a blog now. Get ready!...aaand...GO!

So RUN, the Peter's origin story novella, is waiting for editing. It should (should) commense this week. I hope to get this one done as soon as possible. People have been waiting (read: patiently) for a few months now. I have to jump from my pro-bono editor to one I have to pay. And it's payday this week. I will keep everyone posted on that.

In other news, I'm 5K words deep into the next short story tentatively titled HELLSPAWN. Check out this little excerpt:

I'm writing furiously on this bit and will have it done within the next week or two (depending on the amount of real-job-work I have).

And there's more great stuff coming to RENEGADE DATA CORE so keep your eyes peeled!

Until next time. . .

17 April 2012

Excerpt - The Technocrat Draft

I've been writing (like a boss).

Like all great pieces of fiction, I had to leave the first part of the next novel alone for a while. I've been inundated with work, homework, and studying for a professional certification. They aren't excuses, but they are pretty good reasons.

Here and there I've worked on the next novel, THE TECHNOCRAT, and wanted to share a bit of what I've completed. I'm thinking of doing this in a chapter-by-chapter style. I write a chapter, get it edited and rewrite until beautiful, then sell each chapter individually for $0.10-0.25. Yes, that is 10-25cents (USD).

We'll see, I still have a lot of writing to do. Until then, enjoy this excerpt from the draft of THE TECHNOCRAT:


The Democratic Republic of Haven Butte
Titan, Saturn
08 January 2306


            The wind howled and moaned as it swept through the deserted streets of Haven Butte. Curfew was in effect. No one dared brave the city at night, lest they be spotted by the army and gunned down. No questions would be asked. There would be no hearings or investigations. The Revolutionary Council was clear on the curfew. Dissident elements still infested Haven Butte. The curfew was for the good of the people.
Judd Wooller watched from the window in his darkened apartment as a patrol of six Revolutionary Army troopers (more like children playing at war) and a technical moved by on the street below. Judd noticed that some of the idiots didn’t even have full kit. Some had load bearing gear while others stuffed magazines and canteens in the pockets of their cold weather clothing. They carried their weapons as if they were on a hunting trip. It was a miracle they had managed to overthrow the king and his ruling elite.
“This place is crawling with patrols,” the man beside Judd said in a whisper.
The patrol moved past and Judd breathed a sigh of relief.
“They’re gone,” Judd said.
“How long has it been?” the other man asked.
“A little over a month,” Judd said.
“Lord d’Helion wouldn’t leave his investment and us to die. . .would he?”
Judd shook his head. “We’re far from Mars, Patrick. Who knows what’s happening on the mons, or the red planet.”
Patrick’s shoulders slumped.
“But, if we wait any longer these revolutionaries will come after us,” Judd said.
“How would we get out?” Patrick asked. “The nearest city-state is over two hundred kilometers from here. Titan may be more developed in terms of terraforming than other moons, but we would still die in the wilderness.”
“Better that than be tortured to death for any connection with the previous government.”
Patrick couldn’t argue with Judd’s logic.
Judd walked away from the window and into the apartment’s kitchen. A pot of fresh coffee sat on the counter. Though it was late at night neither man could sleep. Judd poured himself a large mug of the brew and sat down at the kitchen table.
Patrick still stood. He wrung his hands and looked around the apartment as if he was watching a mouse run along the floor.
“Sit down,” Judd said. “You’re making me nervous.”
“How can you be so calm?”
“I’m not. But unlike you I can control my emotions. Get yourself a cup of coffee and sit down. It’s not like there’s a whole lot we can do anyway.”
Patrick trudged over to the counter and retrieved a mug from the cabinet overhead.
Suddenly there was a knock on the door.
Patrick jumped and let go of the mug. The ceramic cup hurtled to the floor and shattered into a dozen pieces.
“Open up,” a gruff voice said. “Revolutionary Army. Random inspection.”
Patrick cursed.
Judd waved Patrick down and got up to answer the door.
“Good evening, sir,” the ragamuffin soldier said. “Identification please.”
“I need to get it,” Judd said. “Please come in.”
The soldier at the door and a second trooper strode into the flat. Judd took note that neither man kept both hands on their assault rifles.
Judd pulled his and Patrick’s identification cards out of a drawer and presented them to the first soldier.
The boy glanced at the cards and then at Judd.
“These aren’t authorized identification cards,” he said.
“We’re contractors,” Judd said. He neglected to mention their nationality. “We got stuck here during the revolution. Every time we try to apply for new ID’s we’re turned away.”
The soldier looked at each of them with a suspicious eye.
“Run the cards,” the first soldier said. “They could be on the kingdom database.”
The other trooper produced a handheld scanner and ran each card. The device chimed and displayed the readings.
Judd Wooller knew he was in trouble when the two soldiers shared a look and their demeanors changed.
“We’re going to need you to come with us,” the first soldier said.
“Is there a problem?” Judd asked.
“You’re Olympian.”
“Is that a crime?”
The soldier leveled his assault rifle at Judd’s midriff. “The Olympus Mons Technocracy supported the King and his regime. We have specific instructions to bring you in for questioning.”
More like interrogation, Judd thought.
The second soldier moved to secure Patrick, and the first soldier looked to watch.
Moron.
At that moment Judd launched himself at the first soldier and tackled him. The trooper fell hard and let go of his weapon. Before the man could react Judd pummeled his face with punches. The soldier’s companion turned to see what was happening, only to have Patrick smash him across the face with a mean right hook.
Before Judd could grab the dropped weapon four more Revolutionary Army soldiers barged into the apartment and leveled their weapons at Judd and Patrick.
Judd and Patrick raised their hands in defeat.
They were roughed up before being cuffed with zip ties and shoved out of the flat and through the apartment building. Dark bruises were forming on Judd’s and Patrick’s faces, and several cuts to their faces and heads bled. To Patrick’s credit he remained straight faced and dry eyed.
“We didn’t want trouble,” the first soldier said as he wiped his bloody nose. “We just wanted to ask some questions. But now you’re in for it.”
“I’ve spent my time in the military,” Judd said. “I already know what’s going to happen.”
The six soldiers shoved Judd and Patrick outside into the cold, dark night. The roads were slick with packed snow – there had been no municipal services since the King had been overthrown. Patrick slipped and fell flat on his back.
“Get up,” one of the troopers said.
Patrick tried to get his feet under him, but his bound hands made it difficult. He strained his head up as he fought to stand – and stopped.
“Get up,” Judd said, his voice a harsh growl.
Patrick wouldn’t stop staring at the sky.
“What are you looking at?” another soldier asked.
They all turned their attention up. Above them Saturn dominated the sky. Slim, bright streaks decorated the scene with brilliant colors.
“It’s just a meteor shower,” a soldier said.
Judd’s eyes widened as realization sunk in.
“They’re here.”
“What?” the first soldier asked. “What are you talking about?”
The soldiers began to move their prisoners again when the first units hit the ground.

18 February 2012

Still Rollin

Another day of marketing the book. Stopped and said hello at Legend Comics. Sold two more copies of Der Sternvolker at Krypton Comics here in Omaha, and the Barnes and Noble off of 144th and L in the Oakview Plaza is looking into carrying it. Books-A-Million off of 132nd and L wanted to carry it, but for some reason can't. They might have to become a CreateSpace Direct member. We'll see.

So I'd say all in all that it was a successful day. Still waiting to hear back from The Bookworm and The Game Shoppe, but it all takes time. Patience is key here. The managers at these store do have other things to do...like run their stores.

So where am I at right now with writing?

The novella Run is in the hands of a friend being edited and I should receive it back any day now and will begin working on reworking and rewriting. When done, Run will be available as both an eBook and as a trade paperback.

On the Facebook page I asked if people would read a short story set in the "Der Sternvolker" universe and critique it. Several people voted they would, and I set out to write that short story.
Here is the beginning.


And here is the end.


The short story (to be named) is 4,356 words in its first draft. I've set it aside for now and will revisit it with a first edit in about a week.

More good stuff to come, so keep your eyes peeled.

Until next time. . .

27 January 2012

Stop Hitting Yourself

This past week has been an epic failure for my writing. I've written. . .get ready for it. . .6,000words. Tragic I know, especially when I should be pounding out roughly 1,500-3,000 per day. Damn you work and the need to make money! Damn you Project Management masters degree!

Seriously, though, writing isn't a career for me (yet) and so finding time to write in life is difficult. I'm not complaining, just stating fact. I find ways to write (. . .not at work, of course. . .if my boss is reading this). I mute the TV and bang out a few dozen words at a commercial break. I become a hermit and lock myself in my room for an hour. But word count does suffer due to other activities.
I wil work on this.

So this week's blog? More lessons learned from my adventure self publishing. It's ADVENTURE TIME! (Algebraic!)

Don't Be a (Book)Baby!
BookBaby.com was my leap into self-publishing. I thought, "What a great service! For just $99 I can get my book published as an eBook to Kindle, Nook, Sony Reader, and Apple! Gee golly!" And so I skipped along, my cheeks rosey, and handed BookBaby $99. . .to do what I can now do for FREE!

I'm really kicking myself in the ass on this one. It's not that they're a bad service, per se. They're not. The BookBaby team has been amazingly helpful along the way. My questions are answered in 24hours or less. They have an amazing site. They pay me the moment I hit my payment cut-off. But it's still $99 (or more) for things I CAN DO FOR FREE!

That's a huge lesson here. If you don't have to spend gobs of money on it, don't. If you can spend a fraction of the price using a service like e-junkie to distribute your books in PDF format, DO IT! That, and Amazon has the Kindle Direct Program, Barnes and Noble has the PubIt program, Apple has the iBook Author App. It's all FREE. Okay, yes, they do take a royalty from the purchase. But there is no upfront cost that hurts your wallet. That's the important bit.

Now, BookBaby has sweetend the deal by allowing people to publish to Kobo and Copia, and they have their new print service (I honestly don't know enough their print service to opine on it, so I won't). But CreateSpace has a pretty good deal for authors (have you seen Der Sternvolker on the Barnes and Noble and Books-A-Million websites?). And watch, both Kobo and Copia may start offering services much like Amazon and B&N.

Now, if you so choose to use BookBaby, more power to you. They'll treat you right.
...but it's still $99+.

Pimp Yourself
Wait, no, don't pimp yourself. You're not a word whore! Or maybe you are.
Whatever.
What I mean to say is market yourself. And it can be done on the cheap! Facebook ads and Google AdWords are great advertising tools for very cheap. Bids for your advertisement to pop up can be as low as 5cents ($0.05). Budgets vary, but you can execute a very effective marketing strategy with these tools on the cheap.

But what's FREE?
A Facebook page for you as an author/your site. That's free. And getting your friends and family to 'Like' it is free. Because then other people see their 'Like', look at your page, and they 'Like' it. That is also free.
Creating a Sell Page for your print novel(s) to hand out to local book/comic stores with Microsoft Publisher/Scribus and Adobe Acrobat? This is free (Scribus is very free to download and use).
A Twitter account is free. Everyone has the Twitters! Follow other authors, publishers, agents, and stuff you like. I follow Woodchuck Cider on Twitter (I could use like ten Woodchuck Ciders right now).
A Blog account is free.
A YouTube account is free (although a digital camcorder isn't free, unless built into your computer). Microsoft Movie Maker is free. And there's a ton of stock music and images that are free online. You can make your own free advertisements!
Another great FREE thing: going up and talking to people about your stuff. Though comic/sci-fi/fantasy conventions aren't free, they aren't terribly expensive. Just stay local (ComicCon is definitely not free in any way shape or form...but if you can go, do so and network your little heart out). Book clubs are free. Business cards aren't free, but VistaPrint is $10 for 500 very nice, professional looking business cards. It's not free, but it ain't bad, either.

There are plenty of ways to market yourself for free, or for very little money.

Do Maths
I didn't do maths. That was bad. Want to see my cost v. profits so far?

Item                                         $
BookBaby service                   -$99.00
E-Book Profits                          $62.50
CreateSpace service                -$52.00
Book Profits                              $22.29
E-Junkie Subscription (to date) -$20.00
Total                                       -$86.91

That's bad. The red lettering and negative signs prove it.
If I were a multi-million dollar business I would not be too big to fail and my corporate empire would topple like a house of cards (Noooo!).
So do your maths. Make sure you can make a profit before you spend oodles of money. Then you won't be playing the catch up game (like me. . .shut up).

My action plan?
1) Stop spending money where I don't need to. Der Sternvolker will remain with BookBaby. I've already shelled out that money. But in the future I'm goin the free way. CreateSpace should be my only charges since there is no way to get a print service to print books for free. But I'll make sure there are profits to back that up.
2) Market like a boss without spending all the cash.
3) Write, write, write summore. . .to make more money (but mostly because I like writing. . .and money).

Self-Editing, or: How to Stop Worrying and Love Hitting Yourself
Self-editing is crucial to a good final draft/book. A lot of people are adverse to this. It forces them to analyze their work and admit it's bad. They're forced out of their comfort zones. They have to criticize themselves and improve. We, as human beings, are adverse to such stressors.

We must overcome that adversity and self-edit. Finished something? Drop it for 1-4weeks, then go back and look at it like it's not yours. Then DESTROY IT! Look at the grammar, punctuation, and spelling. Balk at the horrible dialogue and terrible word choice! Force yourself to change everything to "said" and "asked" ("Oh no!" he ejaculated).
Wash, rinse, repeat self-editing process.

I would recommend doing this at least 5 times. Five. Fuenf. Sanqe. Cinco.

And then give it to someone else to ravage. A new set of eyes can make all the difference. Maybe they see something that you didn't because your eyes are bloodshot from staring at a screen for endless hours trying to turn your
crap into a diamond. Just make sure it's someone compitent. Run has been given to the wife of a friend of mine who has a degree in english and such. More to follow on that.

That's all for now folks. I'll be out of town and returning Sunday night, so have a good weekend.

"So remember, if the women don't find you handsome, they should at least find you handy."
- Red Green

18 January 2012

You Are A Girly Man

That's right. I said you.

YOU are, in the wise words of the iron-god himself, ARNOLD SCHWARZENEGGER, a Girly Man/Woman! Especially if you are like so many writers/artists/free spirits out there.

Weight lifting? Please. Running? You're kidding, right? Simple calisthenics? Is that a LOLCAT thing?

If there's something I can't stand it is the (primarily) American virtue to make excuses as to why not to workout.
"I don't have time."
"I'm too tired."
"It's too hard."
"I don't want to get big muscles."

Buck up, buttercup!

Note: there ARE people with real life physical problems that preclude them from exercising. I AM NOT ATTACKING THOSE PEOPLE. I feel for you. It sucks, especially when you like to be active and things like asthma hold you back.

But even then, I go to the gym and there are guys with crutches, casts, and even one guy in a wheel chair, who still make it to the gym and get their lift on. And what about all those guys and gals who have lost limbs that still stay fit in spite of their missing body part? They overcome adversity, soreness, pain, and fatigue to pump iron the way our iron-crushing deity deemed right.
Even if it's walking on the treadmill for 45min each day, at least that is something.

WHY I CARE
Exercise is important to me. I want to be healthy. And when I workout and lift heavy or have a long, hard run I feel AMAZING. The adrenaline is pumping, and I feel like I'm on top of the world.

Exercising has always been big for me. I guess it started in middle school when I watched Dragon Ball Z.

That's right, Dragonball Z.

Goku, Vageta, Gohan, and all of the other characters were ripped. Every time they training they pushed themselves to the limit. I remember the episode where Vegeta trains in the Capsule with 300x Earth gravity. He felt pain. He was tired. But he kept pushing himself to be the best.

And it rubbed off on me. As a young teen each of my workout sessions were full of visions of Vageta egging me on. (Strange, I know, but it motivated me) I COULD lift five more pounds. I COULD do two more repetitions. I COULD run ten more minutes.

This continued when I got into Battletech. The Clans are comprised of genetically grown and enhanced warriors of different phenotypes, and all of them are meant to be stronger, faster, and smarter than the average human being. My favorite: the elementals. These 8ft+ infantry warriors were the strongest physically, and many of the Battletech novels that have elementals in them described their workouts and the stresses they went through. It was very motivating for me.

Nowadays this still drives me a bit. Warhammer 40K's Space Marines add to this ideal.

But these days I focus more on improving myself in order to be a better individual and stay healthy rather than trying to attain unrealistic goals (I will never be able to operate well on less an hour of sleep a night like the Adeptus Astartes). And I want to look good. I want to feel good about myself.

I admit I did slide off at one point and became fat. I felt awful about myself. I was depressed. I was weak.
And I never want to go back to that. (So. . .I might have a few issues)

A lot of my friends are into exercise, too, and we keep one another motivated. It's become a social thing for me, too.

EXERCISE
So, now, allow me to address each excuse I listed above:

"I don't have time" - This is a lie. How much do you just sit and watch TV? How much time do you spend sitting at the computer surfing the internet pointlessly? I do it all the time! Here's a suggestion: during each commercial break MUTE the TV and know out 10-20 push ups and 10-20 sit ups. If you watch TV for two hours you could probably work up to 200 push ups and sit ups! See, is it really that hard?
Here's another suggestion: After dinner, instead of just sitting on the couch and watching TV, go for a walk with family/friends. It helps digestion and burns calories. Again, not so hard.

"I'm too tired." - Some of that tiredness is probably your body not getting enough exercise, and so you fatigue so much faster. Yes, at first exercising will hurt. You will be sore and tight. That's because you are working muscles that haven't been worked hard in ways they've rarely, if ever, been worked. It takes getting used to. But the benefit is worth it. And, after a while, you stop being so sore tired and you have MORE energy.

"It's too hard." - If you keep telling yourself that then yes, it will be. Take a more positive approach that will help you advance yourself. Keep telling yourself, "This is easy." Then believe it. Keep telling yourself, "I can do one more push up," or, "I can go five more minutes on the elliptical." Then do it. That mental part of exercise is all you. You are the only limit to what you can achieve.

"I don't want to get big muscles." - It's not all about getting big muscles for everyone (it is for me, but I'm not everyone). It's about staying healthy. It's about being able to live longer in order to write that fiftieth best-selling novel, or paint that image that captivates the world. Being fit is about taking care of yourself so you can do the things you love and take care of those you care about. You don't need to be an Adonis. You don't need to be like Arnold or The Rock. Just get in healthy shape.

So what can you do?

Here's a simple plan to help you start:
Do three sets of each 15x push ups and 15x sit ups (total 45 push ups, 45 sit ups)
Then, walk/jog/elliptical/bike/run 1 mile.
Do this three days a week (Mon/Wed/Fri OR Tue/Thurs/Sat)

It's simple, it won't kill you starting out of the gate, and in four weeks you'll start feeling a lot better.

Then *gasp!* make a goal to do more! 15 push ups and 15 sit ups too easy? Do three sets of 30 push ups and 30 sit ups. 1 mile a breeze? Do 2 or 3 miles.

That's right: IMPROVE YOURSELF.

Be careful, though. Don't kill yourself the first week and then turn yourself off to exercising completely. Take it slow and build up (over a few months) to bench pressing a car.

Studies have shown that exercise helps prevent serious health problems like heart problems, diabetes, and heart attacks.

EATING
The second element of this is eating right.

That's right, Paula Dean's "Ultra-Deep-Fried-Fat-Cakes-With-Sour-Cream-And-Pig-Guts" isn't good for you. Cake, candy, soda, and other sugar and fat filled goodies are very bad for you, especially in excess. When you eat these things and then do zero exercise you gain fat. Fat, in your body, is stored energy that you didn't use.

This can be problematic. You can get injured easier. You can develop health problems. For women it's harder to find lumps in your breasts. Life ends up being shorter (no, the stored up energy will NOT extend your life span).

One of the prime factors of obesity in the USA is our food pyramid. Whomever came up with that thing needs their head checked.

At the base is 6-11 servings of BREAD.

Let's stop there.

Breads, grains, rice, etc. have carbohydrates were are great sources of energy. But they have a TON of energy. The problem: our bodies do not use it all. Our ancestors never ate a lot of grains. Our bodies aren't geared to process it very fast. So those carbs end up in our bodies as stored fat. And then we have to spend HOURS on the treadmill to work them off.

Butts to that.

The rest of the pyramid talks of Fruits, Veggies, Milk Products, Meats, and Fats.

It's wrong.

That's right, that science (that theory) is wrong.

We need to do some rearranging.

So here is the Food Pyramid of Chris Meyer. It's free. No book to buy. No crazy starve-yourself-diet to kill yourself with.

1. Protein - Protein should be 1/3 to 1/2 of your daily intake. Lean protein, preferably. Chicken, Turkey, Fish, canned Tuna (without the mayo), lean Beef. Everything should be skinless. Everything should have the excess fat cut off.  Protein is what your body needs to maintain muscle and the amino acids in meats help your body do what it does. (Very scientific, I know)

2. Fruits and Veggies - THESE are where your carbs should come from. They give you the energy you need, but don't stick around and load on your body. And they are chalk full of vitamins and minerals. Broccoli and spinach (the bagged leafy stuff, not the nasty canned stuff) are my favorite veggies. Iron and calcium. AMAZING for the bod.

3. Milk Products - There's a school of thought out there that says we shouldn't drink milk. I don't 100% agree with that. Milk has protein and calcium and Vitamin D. But drinking 2% or Whole Milk isn't the answer. 1%, or, better yet, Skim, is where it's at. Tastes okay, and gives you everything you need. There's the milk replacements - soy milk, almond milk. Almond milk is alright. Beware of soy milk (or soy anything - more on that later).

4. Breads, Pastas, Rice - BEWARE! And eat sparingly. This is where a lot of our obesity comes from. Too many heavy carbs, and not enough activity to use it all. I suggest grains be eaten 2-3 times a week at most. Just my recommendation. A slice of bread here, a half cup of pasta there. Small. Moderate. NOT A LOT!

5. Fats, Salt - Eat rarely. Once a week maybe. And salt? A pinch at most, maybe in cooking. Our foods are so full of salt these days we get overdosed. Stop using so much. You'd be surprised how good food tastes without it.

A Note About Soy - EVIL! When eaten, soy breaks down in the body as estrogen. Sure, it takes a lot. But think if you ate soy once every day for a year? Men, you will have man boobs and start over thinking the dumbest things (What do you mean we should go to that restaurant? Are you calling me fat?). Women, your mood swings will be even worse than they already are. While soy in VERY small doses is alright, use it sparingly (I don't eat it at all).

The cheat meal - You can't murder yourself with healthiness forever. ONCE a week have ONE cheat meal.
That's right, ONE cheat meal.
Have A slice of cake.
Have A cheeseburger.
Have A big cookie with milk.
Have A meal at McDonald's (although that stuff's nasty as is...).
Have A bowl of Fetuccini Alfredo.

The point of the cheat meal is to reward yourself. You spend the entire week eating right. It's time to relax and have a bit of the good stuff. That way you will crave the bad stuff less.

It's all about self control and moderation.

MORE RESOURCES
Here are some great resources to help you on your get-healthy journey:

Arnold's Book "The New Encyclopia of Modern Bodybuilding": http://www.amazon.com/New-Encyclopedia-Modern-Bodybuilding-Updated/dp/0684857219/ref=sr_1_2?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1326936266&sr=1-2

Men's Health "Abs Diet Plan": http://www.amazon.com/Abs-Diet-Six-Week-Flatten-Stomach/dp/1579549985/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1326936350&sr=1-1

Crossfit:   http://www.crossfit.com/ 

Bodybuilding.com's Workouts: http://workout.bodybuilding.com/

Until next time. . .

13 January 2012

Hellooooo

This weekend will be a big event for me: I'm going to market my book.

*Gasp!*

I know, right? I'm actually going to leave the house and interact with actual people in an attempt to get stores to carry Der Sternvolker.

*Gasp again!*

It's ironic that, as a self-published author, I'm having to turn into a salesman or sorts. When looking for a new job I interviewed for several sales positions and decided that it just wasn't my bag.
The joke is on me.

So what's the plan, you ask? Well, here is my plan, in brief, for you to read.

*Gasp thrice!*

That's right, I'm giving you my secrets. . .which are probably not really secrets at all. I'm sure dozens, if not hundreds of self-published authors have reached and torn through their comfort bubble and trekked into the world to get their books out there.
Why am I giving you my plan? While "we self-publishers" are not a team, a union, some Occupy Wall Street movement, or a coven (though look at scientology and you could create some sort of cult), I do think that sharing practices is good. Now, ask me to promote your book as a fellow self-publisher and I'll say, "Butts to that, you're on your own. Deuces."

Yes, I am an asshole.

But I digest (lunch, at the moment). Here, in all of its glory, is my plan to get my trade paperback book on shelves:

Timeframe: 01/13/2011 - 01/28/2011 (Though realistically this will be a continuous thing to keep up relations with the stores and genuinely support them and not be that douche who just visits to see if they've got his book yet (And yes, I realize that's a run on sentence)).
Locations: Several local stores I've chosen, and two major distributers
Resources: Local Stores - a free copy of the book, a business card, and a sell sheet
Big Distributers - Front and Back jacket images and information on book to send them per their requirements online
Plan: Part 1 - During set times (starting tomorrow) I'm going to visit these stores in PROFESSIONAL ATTIRE (take note of this; business casual that is IRONED) and visit with the manager. I will introduce myself, and then pitch my book to them. Once complete I will leave them with the free copy of the book, business card, and sell sheet. Then, as a good fellow, support their business by visiting their store to buy stuff. This second part will be easy as I buy stuff from them anyhow.
Part 2 - If/when the store puts my book up I may schedule a showing at that store to talk about the book and self-publishing in general. This to be planned in further depth.

I will post Saturday post-outing with updates, lessons learned, and maybe even some pictures.

Until next time. . .

25 November 2011

Skyrim, Conan, and Writing Progress

Been playing a lot on my XBox 360 lately. Lots of Modern Warfare 3 online. If you see me I'm RenegadeDataCor (OmahaRenegade was already taken! WTF!?).

But I've also been exploring the wide, wondrous world of Skyrim!
I love this game. It has such an in-depth story line, not just on the surface in the missions you do for everyone and anyone, but also in the background stuff. Going through a lot of tombs and caves you see a lot of ancient Nord art and, fighting the reanimated Nord skeletons, you see a lot of ancient Nord weaponry. I love this aspect of the game. It gives the entire world of Skyrim a great deal of flavor and gives you a sense of where the Nords came from. It also makes me ask questions like, "What were they doing when they died?", and, "Why would a Nord be buried with an iron ingot?"

In the game I'm a red haired Nord (surprise surprise, right?), seen here.
Yes,  I know, the picture quality isn't great. I play on XBox 360, not computer, so screenshots are done with my iPhone 4.
Technology at its best, I know.
Another feature the XBox 360 version does NOT have is the ability to pan the camera around your character. So you can't see the awesome red skull warpaint on his face. If you could he would look REALLY mean.

Really. . .he would. . .

Alaric Khan (my character) is on the roughly defined berserker track. Two handed weapons (a steel warhammer in this case), heavy armor, smithing, and some blocking are his specialties. I have added a bit in lock picking  sneaking, archery (damn mooses!), and light magic (burn, frost troll, burn!!) to round him out.

I have, of course, sided with Skyrim.
Here I am at a Stormcloak encampment preparing for another daring raid to free Skyrim from the damned Empire.

The vast number of characters and NPCs really gets me, too. It's incredible just how lively towns and villages are. I mean, it's still a game, and with it there's that game-stiffness to it all. But Bethesda did a great job on everything. The graphics are incredible. And fights with dragons are truly epic. :) I love how there aren't any specified classes. Instead the player develops certain ability areas to their liking. The 600 page strategy guide gives players a general guide if they want to specialize their characters (ie. Berserker), but trait development it completely left up to the player. I really think this is the new standard instead of the more locked-in classes of other RPGs, MMO or otherwise.

So if you don't hear from me for a few weeks/months/years. . .brb, goin ta Skyrim. :3

All this Northern barbarian fighting has gotten me into a rather Northern barbarian mood (although my ancestors were Northern barbarians, so that might have something to do with it). I've been reading the Conan stories lately. Robert E. Howard wrote some amazing stories, and the prints I'm reading (with the Frank Frazzetta covers) are great! A buddy of mine went to Vegas to visit family and happened upon a small bookstore off the strip. Herein he found IMMACULATE copies of the 1963 prints of the Conan books. We now have all of them.

While some of the writing is kinda of bad (in some cases miserable) the stories are awesome and ALL THAT IS MAN! Dangerous fights with swords, daring adventures around the world, fearful dread magics, and drinking and wenching as you go!! Who couldn't love these stories!!?? And as the books and stories go on they get better. I just read the story The Frost Giant's Daughter. The battle scene between Conan and the Vanir warrior was heart pumping. My adrenaline was through the roof! So I went to the gym to work it off. The point is these stories are great and you should read them.

So go, read them. Now!

But I'm sure all this talk of video games and reading books has you wondering, "Where do you have time to write?"
Worry not, reader, for I have been writing up a storm. Run, the upcoming novella, is in it's second chapter, with the third starting soon. If you still haven't read the free first chapter, go HERE and do so. You could also go to my DeviantArt website and read it there.

Next Blog Post: Occupy My New House! Join me!. . .actually just read about it here. I want my new house to myself. The last thing I need are smelly picketers. :/

Until next time. . .

15 November 2011

Run - Chapter 1

I must admit I've been slacking on posts, both here and on the Facebook page. Life is a little busy right now as I start a new job and begin my Masters degree.

But I have been writing.

Really, I have. Though it's been slow (much like other projects I've been working on). So I've decided to treat you, my audience, with the first chapter of the novella titled Run, Peter's origin story. You can see it in PDF format on the RENEGADE DATA CORE website in the FREE STUFF section.

Or check it out here: Run - Chapter 01

I'll have a longer post up later this month.

Until next time. . .

12 October 2011

Writings, LinkedIn, and Amazon Kindle

Writing
I promise I HAVE been writing vigorously. It's just been taking a while as I'm also between careers and looking for a full-time job. My current project is Peter's origin story tentatively titled "Run" (though I am planning another short story for late October/early November). So far I have a chapter written, with four more to go. This will be a novella and sell for $1.50 on the site. Just for your reading pleasure here's an extract from the first draft:

“How much do you have for a ship?”
Alfred Zwinger stared at the ragged pup in front of him.
The young man had the trademark white-blond hair of Sternvolk that lived the majority of their lives on the community ships of the fleet. His skin was pale from a life of exposure to only artificial lights.
It was the man’s eyes that sent a shiver down Alfred Zwinger’s back. They were as cold as the ice on Titan.
They were predator’s eyes.
Now they were locked onto Alfred, studying him.
“I have five hundred thousand marks with which to purchase a ship,” the young man said.
Alfred shook his head. “Can’t buy much for five hundred.”
“I’m not looking for a yacht. I just need a ship that works.”
“Not many ships for that price, period.”
“Don’t feed me that crap. I know that the Community Fleet took four pirate ships within the last two standard weeks, and that at least two of the Community Fleet picket vessels are on your payroll. You probably paid the crews half what those ships were actually worth.”
The kid was informed, Alfred had to give him that.
“What makes you think I want to sell any of my vessels to you?” Alfred asked.
“Because I have money in the bank, which is money in your pocket. You don’t have to worry about finding me if I don’t pay. Less risk.”
He had a point.
“You can verify your funds?”
The man proffered his new-model data pad. His account information was displayed on the screen.
Sure enough, there was five hundred thousand marks.
“You didn’t kill anyone for this money, did you?”
“Would it matter if I did?”
“Not unless it comes to bite me in the ass.”
“No, I didn’t kill anyone. I earned some of it. Part of it is a loan.”
“So the bank may come looking for you.”
“I’ll worry about the bank. You worry about finding a ship that matches my offer.”
Alfred scratched his chin in thought. It was a good deal.
With a nod Alfred stuck out his hand. “Alright, let’s see what we can do, Herr. . .”
The blond man gave Alfred’s hand a firm shake.
“Drexel. Peter Drexel.”


LinkedIn
When I first heard of LinkedIn I thought it was just a mobile phone App. Those of you who know what LinkedIn is are probably balking at that statement. When I discovered the actual site (i r smrt) I found myself in a whole new world, and a whole new platform to market my products.

But LinkedIn is more than that. You can connect with like minded people, find people with certain expertise, and ask questions and receive feedback. For example I posed a question to several of the writer's groups I belong to in order to gather info to improve my website (note: expect changes to the website). It's also a place to find jobs and post your resume to a global network.

If you're a writer like me and you want to get into some of the good LinkedIn writers' groups, I would suggest Writer's Hangout, Science Fction readers, writers, collectors, and artists, LinkEds & writers, Independently Published Author's Marketing Association, and Authors, Writers, Publishers, Editors, & Writing Professionals. All are excellent sources of knowledge and info full of numerous people with tons of knowledge about writing, publishing, and marketing your work.


Kindle 
This is a bit delayed, but I thought I'd bring it up: Amazon now has a whole new line of Kindles. The newest basic Kindle is now $79. This is a great price for such a device and makes it more accessible to more people. The Kindle Touch and Kindle Keyboard are $99. Again, cheap and reliable.

I rue this last bit, though, because I purchased my Kindle Keyboard for $139 just months ago. $139 is the price of the Kindle Keyboard with 3G. And finally the Kindle Touch with 3G is $149. Very reasonable prices for eReaders. Such low prices will allow more and more people to purchase them and make reading eBooks more common.

Finally Amazon has debuted it's tablet, the Kindle Fire, set for release November 15th and priced at $199. While there has been debate over whether it will dethrone the iPad as the tablet of choice, there's no doubt that the people at Amazon thought this one through very well. It can play movies and music, and allows users to read digital magazines and books. Amazon advertises thousands of apps and games. Web brousing will be done with the browser Amazon Silk, and Amazon provides free cloud storage for all your Amazon content. And if you're an Amazon Prime Member you'll enjoy unlimited, instant streaming of over 10,000 popular movies and TV shows.

All the details can be seen HERE.

So what do I think?

Do I think? 

As one wise filosofikal kitteh once filosofikized, "Aifinkso, derefor it iz!"

Anyhoo, I like the Kindle Fire so far. Relatively cheap price compared to the iPad with numerous similar features from a company that (I think) has been reliable with its technological products. Amazon didn't just release this product. They worked years on it to perfect it and make it the right device. Not so companies like HP, whose tablet was dead on arrival, or ASUS who ran out of ASUS Eee Transformers within the first month of release. The only drawback with the Kindle Fire is that it doesn't have 3G capability. That said, though, many people have wireless in their homes or portable 3G/4G wireless hotspots (I have a built-in 3G hotspot in my iPhone), and many businesses have wi-fi in their buildings now.

 Honestly I would have to play with a Kindle Fire to get a real good feel for it, and only time will tell if it's the product everyone is anticipating.

Until next time. . .

10 June 2011

Website, Editing, and revisit of Pogoplug

First in today's post I wanted to direct you to the website's new URL: http://www.renegadedatacore.com.
That's right, I've purchased the domain name and now the website is officially standing on its own. Google Sites (https://sites.google.com/) makes it very easy to redirect your DNS to your Google Site. In fact, in the "Manage Site" section of your Google Site there are instructions on how to redirect. My DNS provider, 1and1 (http://www.1and1.com/), is very user friendly, and cheap ($5 for the first year) and, once I had purchased the DNS and received my customer ID (takes anywhere from 15 - 24 hours after sign-up and purchase), it took me a few minutes to put in all the information to redirect the DNS to my site :). This is very cool stuff, and so easy for people like me who are still trying to wrap their heads around the more advanced website stuff. (And I know, all of you veteran programmers and website owners/designers are probably thinking, "Wow." Trust me, I know I'm a bit behind the power curve, but I'm a faster learner)

Second, I wanted to give a little spiel about editing your manuscript.
So you have your completed manuscript. 80,000+ words, and months of blood, sweat, and tears, and your first novel is done. Congratulations! :) Seriously, it takes a LOT of dedication and discipline to finish that manuscript.
My first suggestion: put it away! That's right. Once you type "THE END", save your word document and don't open it for the next 7-14 days.
Next: Purchase the book Self-Editing For Fiction Writers: How To Edit Yourself Into Print (I got the Kindle edition). In the eleven chapters the writers, Renni Browne and Dave King, show fiction writers how to self-edit their work and sharpen it to make it the manuscript it SHOULD be.
Now I know what you're saying: "My book is a masterpiece! I should just publish it now!"
Don't. Please don't. I thought the same thing at first. After reading this book, and going through Der Sternvolker (my first finished book) I realized I had A LOT of work ahead of me (hence the delayed release date...). There are so many mistakes we as novice writers make in our first manuscript, and even veteran writers make, that we need to take the time to carefully self-edit ourselves, especially if you are looking to self-publish like I am.
Another thought that may come to your mind: "Oh, I'll get a freelance editor to do it."
This is good, in theory. Don't get me wrong, there are plenty of excellent freelance editors out there. But they cost money. A LOT of money. I made the mistake of not evaluating my financial situation before entering into a contract with a freelance editor. She wasn't trying to cheat me out of my money, she was actually one of the best in her field and was dedicated to helping me improve my manuscript to publishing quality. But her cost was over $2,000. Once I realized I couldn't support that cost, even over several installments, I had to duck out of the contract, and I was out the $870 I had already paid her.
Lesson learned: GO THE CHEAP ROUT FIRST.  Self-Editing For Fiction Writers: How To Edit Yourself Into Print is $8.32 on Amazon ($9.99 for the Kindle edition...which seems backwards, but oh well). That small cost is much better to start with than the hundreds or thousands a freelance editor costs.
Now if you have that kind of money, and it is financially viable for you to purchase the services of a freelance editor, more power to you. I'm just suggesting you look at the lower cost option, first. This is especially good for those who are open to criticism and can honestly and dispassionately evaluate themselves without their ego getting in the way.

Finally, I want to replug a great little device I discovered several months ago: the Pogoplug. This little device is an external hard drive that allows you to access and share your personal content wherever you have an internet connection. There are no size limits, and no subscription fees. When I first blogged about Pogoplug the price of the device was set at $139. Now it's $99. Ofcourse, that's more expensive than Dropbox, but with unlimited size, compared to Dropbox's 2GB, it pays for itself over time. Not that I'm knocking Dropbox - I have an account with them I use regularly - but Pogoplug  is clearly much more powerful. I guess it really depends on what your needs are. For me Dropbox is just fine - and it's FREE (which is huge for me right now as money is a bit tight). But if you're looking for a higher end, more powerful device for much larger files, and you have a hundred bucks available in your budget, then I suggest Pogoplug.

Before I go, I want you all to know that I WILL have another short story up soon. I need to edit it (using the lessons taught in Self-Editing For Fiction Writers: How To Edit Yourself Into Print), and then it will be available in the FREE STUFF section of the RENEGADE DATA CORE website.

Until next time. . .

05 June 2011

14 May 2011

Final Cover Image

Here it is! What you've all been waiting for: the final cover image!


The wonderful and talented Ganassa created this piece. A big hearty thanks to him!

You can find free downloadable wallpapers of this image in the FREE STUFF section of the Renegade Data Core website. I will have the formatted cover of the book up soon, along with the book description.

We're coming down to the wire on the book. Currently it stands at 75,293 words as it heads to the copy-editor. That said, I may be pushing the publication date back a bit. When I started out on this journey of self-digital-publication I never thought everything would take as long as it has. Even writing took longer than I thought. I'm still shooting for the 1st of June, but be prepared to have the release date pushed back a week or two.

While pushing the release date back is bad, good can come of this in two ways. 1) You will receive the quality product I promise in my ABOUT section of the site. I would never want to sell you an eBook or eComic that was of degraded quality purely because I rushed the job. 2) This gives me a better measure for when I write my next book (already in the works) to provide you, the readers, a more accurate, realistic release date.

Keep watching for updates.

Until next time. . . 

23 April 2011

Cover Art and BookBaby

First and foremost I would like everyone to see the first rough sketch of the cover of my upcoming book Der Sternvolker.

Here we see Peter (center), Amelia (right), and Balder (left) running through a burning city and fighting for their lives against some ghastly enemy.

This piece was done by the talented Ganassa at DeviantArt. Check out more of his amazing work there.

The book itself is quickly nearing completion, and June 1st is just around the corner. Keep watching here and at on the Renegade Data Core site for more updates and free content!

Second I would like to direct everyone's attention to BookBaby. BookBaby is an eBook distribution site that distributes your eBook to all the major stores such as the iPad store, Amazon, Barnes and Noble, and Sony Reader. For $99 you can distribute your book and you get all the profits. Unlike PayPal or business sites they do not take a cut off the top. It is one flat rate of $99. A pretty good deal if you ask me.

Der Sternvolker will be available through the Apple iPad store, Amazon Kindle, Barnes and Noble, and Sony Reader store via BookBaby when the book is published. You will also be able to purchase the book from the Renegade Data Core website. It's up to you.

Until next time. . .

06 April 2011

39,000 Words and Growing

It's been a while since I've updated, so I thought I'd give you all a small blog posting today just to let you know that I'm alive and still writing.

The book, tentatively titled In Darkness Forged has reached over 39,000 words and is still growing. By the time the book is finished it should be somewhere around 80-85,000 words. This could increase as I continue to write, but 80,000 words is the goal. I'm also muddling around with titles. While In Darkness Forged is very ominous and could draw a lot of attention, I'm not sure it's the title I want for this book. The Sternvolker is the other title I'm throwing around. This one is a bit more descriptive since the main character, Peter Drexel, is Sternvolk (or Star Folk; the proper German for that would be Sternvolker, the -er denoting the masculine).

With the massive amount of work I've completed on the story the 01 June 2011 publishing date should be easy to reach. In fact, if I get everything done sooner, I may push the publishing date to an earlier time. But we'll see how things play out.

I should also have a cover image shortly. I have contacted to artists about completing the cover for my book. Once one of them gets back to me I will update you regularly on their progress.

And don't forget to check out our Facebook page: http://www.facebook.com/pages/Renegade-Data-Core/106951916051355?sk=wall. 'Like' Renegade Data Core and spread the word through the social network.

Until next time. . .

20 March 2011

The Patient Spider and Yahoo eCommerce

I have just posted a new short story on the Renegade Data Core website titled The Patient Spider. Head over to the Free Stuff section and download it. Again this is FREE science fiction for your enjoyment.

I've been working diligently on both this short story and In Darkness Forged. If there's one thing I'm discovering about all this it's that it's not easy. Between work, fight training, bull riding training (yes, I said bull riding), and friends, writing one story is hard enough, let alone writing TWO. I give props to those authors who do it every day. I know there are a lot of authors at The Black Library who work on two, three, or four stories/scripts/comics DAILY. That's incredible. My hats off to you, gentlemen.

I will be posting yet ANOTHER short story next month around the same time (though probably after Easter, as I will be spending much of my time with family that weekend). Hopefully this one will have associated art with it to spice it up a bit.

In other news, I've decided that, prior to the release date of In Darkness Forged, I will be migrating Renegade Data Core to a Yahoo eCommerce website. I thought about using PayPal, but a $30-$40 a month Yahoo eCommerce account is much more cost effective than PayPal. PayPal charges 2.5% +.05 for each transaction. If I sold just one hundred (100) copies of my book, they would charge me almost $65. I guess the pros of having PayPal, though, is if nothing sells I don't pay them anything. But that's where an aggressive marketing plan comes in.

Until next time...

25 February 2011

RENEGADE CORE

I blog today (well...tonight, really; it's midnight here) with glad tidings and joy in my heart...and my colon.

Allow me to introduce you to my new website: https://sites.google.com/site/renegadecore/

(There's also a link to the right)

This is sort of what I've been talking about on and off over the few months I've had my blog. Renegade Core is my eBook and eComic sales site. Here there will be novels, novellas, short stories, comics, and more for sale. Take a look around the site. The "Free Stuff" section already has some items up for your enjoyment. And there is definately more to come.

This began as a desire to start a small business of my own. Initially, though, the idea was to not only write the books and draw the comics (I would have had a staff working with me), but to also purchase office space and digital printing presses. Upon deeper research, though, I found such a plan was folly. A single digital printing press that I wanted to produce books cost over $500,000. That's one digital printing press. I wanted four.

So I sat down and re-looked my business plan. I wanted to write, and work with others to write stories and draw comics. Creating new, exciting worlds and interesting people to populate them has always been a hobby of mine, and to do so as a job (even a small, part time job) has always been my dream. A friend of mine suggested I go full digital (thank you Martin). At the time Pres. George W. Bush had published his book Decision Points. Data showed that, of the over two hundred thousand copies that were sold that first week/month (I forget at the moment), 60,000 were digital copies. And now eBooks, in either epub or mobi format, are outselling print books (http://www.beyond-black-friday.com/2011/01/27/are-eBooks-finally-outselling-printed-books/).

So I decided that's what I'd do. I write the stories, edit, revise, rewrite (repeat those three numerous times), and then publish them in eReader format and sell them. I would control the content, distribution, pricing, and marketing.

Renegade Core is the culmination of this hair-brained idea. The book I'm writing, In Darkness Forged, is slowly nearing completion and I've set a release date for 1 June 2011. In the meantime I will also be writing two short stories and a novella that will be free to download and enjoy to entice you a bit more. Of course, other content will be put on the website for sale before the big release date of my first book, but it will not have the fan fare (at least for me) as the book.

I hope you enjoy the site. And please, give me feedback on what you like and don't like, and what you would like to see added in the future. I'm an definitely open to ideas.

Until next time...

03 November 2010

Legion - Part 1

As I promised, a bit of fiction - and early! Hooray for me.

This is an idea I've had in my head for a while now. Christian demonology has always intrigued me (probably because I'm Catholic, and our priesthood tends to actively fight demonic machinations; and because of Warhammer 40,000, enough said there). More specifically is the story of the Healing of the Gerasene Demoniac in Mark 5: 1 - 20. Legion (the demons that are part of him) is free in the world, and doesn't want to leave. For a moment in the bible we see demons begging with Jesus. They have ongoing dialogue with Him beyond a simple "Be gone demon!" and general gnashing of teeth. Their conversation implies many deeper things than many of us can fathom - so I took a stab at it.

The story will be serialized in the coming weeks. There will be angels, and fighting, and general demonic wickedness. Let me know what you think!

So, without further ado, Part 1.

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     They could see Him approaching from their position in the tomb. For days they had dwelled there among the dead, enjoying their freedom. Many from the surrounding towns had attempted to stop them and shackle them. It was no use. With their combined strength they had tore their bindings apart and beat their would-be captors. They had even killed a man. The power they held was incredible.
     And then He came. They knew He would come, though they wished it wouldn’t. Now here He was, slowly walking up the banks of the sea. He seemed very plain at first – just another carpenter from another Judaic town. His shoulders and arms were taught with muscle from years of labor. His brown hair was splayed over his shoulders, matching his weather-beaten skin.
     But it was His eyes that riled them most. It was those eyes that had seen everything from before the beginning. They saw all and knew all, and His eyes bore holes into men’s souls. Those eyes knew they were there.
     For a moment the party stopped, and His followers motioned toward a heard of swine, calling greetings to their herders.
     Rage filled them. How dare He come here. How dare He bother them.
     Fury bubbled in their veins, and in a fit of anger they leapt from the tomb and charged toward Him and His followers.
     “Be gone, unclean spirit!” He roared, his face never losing its serene façade. “Come out of that man!”
     Thunder crashed through the air, though no clouds hung in the blue sky.
     “What have you to do with me, Jesus, Son of the Most High God?” they spat. Their body jittered, their neck twitched. “I adjure you by God, do not torment me!”
     Jesus stared down at them – those eyes cutting deep. For a moment there was only silence, Jesus’ followers awe struck at what they were witnessing.
     Then Jesus asked, “What is your name?”
     And they were compelled to answer.
“I am Legion,” they rasped, “for we are many.”
They continued to plead and beg with Him to leave. They were here – free of Lucifer and his machinations. Their power was unmatched by any living human (save Him). They implored Jesus to allow them to remain.
     It seemed as if Jesus would have none of it.
     They were desperate. They would do anything to stay.
     And then they noticed the pigs.
     “There!” they cried. “Send us into the swine! Let us enter them!”
Jesus chopped the air with his hand, and it was like the falling sword of an executioner.
“Be gone!”
Immediately, thousands of demonic souls leapt from the man into the swine herd and for a moment they thought they were free.
But animals are no place for a demon. Fear swept over the herd and they rushed into the sea. All the while the demons cried for them to stop, but to no avail. In moments thousands of pigs were drowned, and the demons were returned to their underworld prison. As they fell – as they had at the end of the war against God – they cursed Jesus.
“We will return!” they bawled, tumbling back into oblivion. “And we will have our revenge!”
For two-thousand years they sat, stewing in the depths of hell, awaiting the right moment.

30 October 2010

Serious (Small) Business

I apologize for the lack of updates. Work over here has taken me away from my normal posting time (as has sleep).

Today I would like to talk a little bit about small business. I am already working on a business and marketing plan for my small business, and when I return from overseas I will be working to realize my publishing dreams (he said with stars in his eyes). I'm quickly finding out that getting everything needed to start a small business - all the minute details - is almost overwhelming. How does one start a small business with everything they have to do?
One way to do it is by sheer force of will. I salute those who can do that.
The way I am going is to gather all the resources I can in order to make a polished (or at least not-so-rough) finished product. I discovered two sites that will help any would-be entrepreneur in their quest to start their own business, whether it be a full up company, or an at-home-run eBusiness. First is www.sba.gov/, the Small Business Administration's online resource. It is chock full of details, including resources in your local area. The "Small Business Planner" will assist you in actually designing your business and gathering the tools and knowledge needed to run it, as well as articles on leadership, management, and other topics of interest. The second site is www.score.org/. SCORE provides workshops and articles for small business start-up and development, and even has a resource for local, seasoned entrepreneurs to mentor you as you take your small business journey. Both sites are free, and are chalk full of useful information.

Second on today's business topics is this little device: http://money.cnn.com/2010/06/25/smallbusiness/pogoplug/index.htm. I thought this was really cool. An external hard drive that has internet capability so you can acess your business files anywhere. Don't get me wrong, DropBox and sites like it are a boon to anyone or any start-up small business. But large space on such sites comes at a price (DropBox is $250 for extended space). This $139 PogoPlug is an excellent, cost-effective resource to store business files and be able to access them outside of the home or office.
Just a side note: I found it strange I found this on CNN rather than Forbes...but useful knowledge is useful knowledge.

Slowly but surely working on a bit of fiction. I should have that up within a week or two for your viewing pleasure.

23 October 2010

Fates Entwined - An Introductory Story

I have decided to post some of the more refined, more thought out material I have been working on (to further prove that, yes, I AM working to be a writer). The last bit of ficiton I posted was completely sloppy, more throwing something on the page to get the gears in the brain turning rather than for any canon purpose.

Fates entwined is the beginning of a much larger story I am writing, titled "The Pilgrimage". The finished book will be roughly 120,000 words, or roughly 450 pages. I have toiled roughly a year on this - going through revisions, changing of characters and backgrounds, refinement, and, at times, complete deletion of the work I began and starting over with a completely blank word document. And I am more than sure that, when I submit the final copy (of my revisions) editors will have their say and force me to revise again.

Author's Note: This story takes place in the year 2304. Earth is uninhabitable, and humanity has populated the other planets and moons in the Solar System. I will write more in the following weeks about the universe this, and following, books will take place in.

So, without further ado, is the introductory story (or first chapter, however you like to look at it) of "The Pilgrimage". Please let me know what you think. Constructive criticism is very welcome.

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            The door hissed open and she was greeted by the sight of a Sternvolker standing dominantly behind a desk in the center of the room. The centrifuge imparted .5 gravity on its occupants, and a lifetime of living in zero-G made even the light gravity oppressive to the young astrogatress as she strolled in. She tried to look confident and prayed the dye in her hair wouldn’t run.
            As Amelia Krueger stepped into the small, rented office, she sized up her would-be employer. He was handsome, if a bit rough around the edges. A shock of blond hair topped a pale face while silver, feline eyes studied her as a hunting cat studies its prey. His jet-black spacer suit was accented with deep crimson in the reinforced shoulders and elbows. The man was clearly fit, his suit betraying a body shaped and sculpted from years of exercise and fighting. Over his shoulders he wore a half cloak in the style many Sternvolke ship captains adopted; his was made of Elysian white tiger fur.
            “Henrietta Hahn,” the man stated, using the false name she had provided him.
            “Yes, sir,” she replied.
            He extended his hand, his hard look never changing for a moment. “I am Peter Drexel, Captain of the Loki. It’s a pleasure to meet you.”
            Amelia took the proffered hand, attempting to give a strong shake to portray herself as confident.
            “The pleasure is mine, Herr Kapitän,” she said.
            They both took their seats and Peter steeped his fingers in front of his face.
            “I was quite impressed by your resume,” he began. “For a lower echelon astrogatress, that is.”
            Though her name was falsified, her education and experience she had left pure.
            “I worked hard to earn the grades and postings I was given,” she said simply. “I had help from no one.”
            Now that was a lie, but she let it roll off her tongue as easily as if it were the God-honest truth. No need to betray her identity by letting the details of her family slip.
            Peter nodded. “Excellent. Now you know, even with your records, I can’t pay you very well.”
            Amelia just nodded. “I understand. I have to prove myself to you first.”
            A harsh laugh barked from the Captain’s throat. “No, actually I’m dirt poor. Got a second-hand ship with a loan. I’ll pay you what I can, with the promise that I’ll reimburse you when I make it big.”
            She had no clue what to say. Here was this man, ship and all, and he didn’t have a single cent to his name. It astounded Amelia – and, she had to admit, impressed her a little.
            “That is fine,” she replied with a nod. “I accept your terms. What class of ship it?”
            “Old-style Voyager-class frigate,” Peter said as he filled out some documentation on his personal data pad.
            “Oh,” Amelia chirped. “Such vessels require three astrogators. With whom will I be working with?”
            Those predator eyes speared her over the edge of the PDP.
            “No one,” he admitted. “You’re the only brain-job that answered the request I put out.”
            Amelia was shocked, both at the racial slur and the fact she would be administering a ship alone. She was unused to both.
            “W-w-what?” she stammered.
            “That’s right,” Peter chuckled, giving her a broad, leonine grin. “You’re in the spotlight, Ms. Hahn. Welcome to the crew of the Loki.

            Peter watched the petite astrogatress retreat from the tiny office he had procured for the duration of the hiring. She was cute, though those light brown eyes and chocolate colored hair made her look very plain-Jane, even as astrogatresses went. But, he admitted to himself as he added her name and details to his crew roster, she was very doable. Maybe, if some voyages got long and lonely…
            Reviewing his list, he was almost complete. He had a short technical crew – two personnel where six were required – a hearty, somewhat portly man named Zoryn Revnik, and his pretty little assistant, Maria Bittner. The engineering crew was short, too, with only the chief engineer, Josef Hannover, and his two subordinates. Berget Sondheim was an experienced shuttle pilot, and the promise of adventure seemed to eclipse the lack of money he was paying her. His medical team, a Doctor Hans Nussbaum and his wife and assistant, Rita, were more than happy to have some work, too. And, finally, his cargo master, Felix Warkaiser, was short an assistant. The geezer seemed content regardless. Not that Peter had any cargo yet, anyway.
            But things were finally coming together. Everyone told him they wouldn’t, that he would fail before he even started. His friends said he was crazy. His parents were vehemently against this whole thing. But Peter was going to do it. He was going to strike out on his own Pilgrimage – a true test of a Sternvolker’s strength and resilience – and return a legend. He would show them he was worth something. He would show them he wasn’t a screw up, like everyone thought.
            “I’ll show all of them,” he growled to himself.
            A chime at the door heralded his next appointment.
            “Enter!” he called.
            And immediately regretted it. A mountain shrugged into the cramped workplace. It stood well over two meters, and every inch of his bulk was pure muscle. His white skin was detailed with numerous winding tattoos of dragons, dire wolves, and god-like ursine, trailing from his bald scalp, past the thick, bark-brown beard, and into the collar of his coyote tan, military-style spacer suit. Beady, intelligent eyes stared at Peter from above.
            “I am Balder Faltskog,” the mountain spoke, his voice betraying a strong Scada accent. “I am the Stallari of a five man squad, specializing in general security.”
            “Peter Drexel,” Peter introduced himself, attempting to regain his composure. “I am Captain of the Loki.”
            Balder nodded, and Peter swore that the centrifuge would shake – it didn’t.
            “I saw your ad on the net,” the mercenary explained. “It seemed like the best job we’ve had in a while.”
            Peter nodded. “I heard about what happened on Olympus Mons. Bad business having a bent employer. Especially when he’s a high ranking Technocrat.”
            “Indeed,” Balder agreed. “Right now my men and I are under scrutiny of the community fleet business bureau. I think it’s more for being caught being associated with a smuggling operation rather than actually being associated with it. We figure an easy job would be good to clear up our name. And if all works out, perhaps we can work together in the future.”
            “I agree,” Peter said. “If you’re willing, I’ll accept your offer now and we’ll hash out the details of the contract.”
            Balder nodded and extended his hand. “Bargained and done.”
            Peter shook and smiled. “To a profitable future.”

            Balder stepped through the office door and felt relieved. An immense weight had just been lifted off of his massive shoulders, and the giant Stallari could finally breathe a sigh of relief. He quickly made his way out of the centrifuge and to the micro-hotel in the community ship where he and his men were staying for the time being. Upon entering the hall of living pods – better known as coffins – Balder was immediately greeted by the sight of his men.
            “You’re back,” Borge Selvik noted. “Any news, Stallari?”
            Borge Selvik had been with Balder the longest, and was his de facto second in command, his Thegn. Though the younger mercenary was nowhere near Balder’s height, he still sported a rock solid build. Long brown hair was pulled into a pony tail at the back of Borge’s head, and deep blue eyes like the oceans of Mars examined everything they saw.
            “Excellent news,” Balder replied, waving his PDP in front of his men. “Some easy work for the next six months. The contract is signed and we start in two days.”
            “Who’s the employer?” Eyolf “The Wolf” Aune asked. “Can he at least keep his illegal activities quiet?”
            Eyolf Aune personified his namesake, his dark brown hair shot through with premature gray, giving his long mane the appearance of wolf’s fur. His hazel eyes shimmered gold in the artificial light of the cramped micro-hotel. His face, tattooed like all of his comrades, sported a long scar down his right cheek and over his mouth, giving the man a permanent sneer. Some said he was a wolf, merely taking human form for the time being. Eyolf did little discourage this theory.
            “A ship captain,” Balder said. “Seems like a straight shooter. Although from the way he talks he seems like one of those nuts who are out on the Pilgrimage.”
            There was a string of curses.
            “Why sign with him then, Stallari?” Ragnar Torfassen inquired. “He’s liable to get us killed.”
            Ragnar Torfassen was younger than Borge and Eyolf, but still a solid warrior. To anyone he looked rather plain; brown hair, blue eyes, tanned (unlike many Sternvolke who spent most of their lives holed up on ships), fit. But, beyond the swirling tattoos that decorated his body were dozens of scars, marking him a veteran of numerous actions.
            “I made it clear,” Balder began, “that we will not be used for offensive operations. We are strictly security. We use our presence as a deterrent, and we fight only when we are forced to. Nothing crazy.”
            Asbjorn Holdremyr shrugged. “Sounds good to me. Do we know where we’re going yet?”
The youngest of Balder’s small command, Balder had hired Asbjorn Holdremyr a year and a half prior, and had been overwhelmingly pleased with the youth’s performance. What he lacked in experience he made up for in motivation and desire to learn. The young man cut his dirty-blond hair relatively short, and his watery blue eyes exuded youthful confidence.
            “Don’t know yet,” Balder admitted. “Our employer will tell us in two day’s time.
            “Don’t worry, gents. This will be an easy job to get us back on our feet. I’ll make sure you’re all taken care of.”
            Eyolf gave his commander a lupine grin. “We know, Stallari. Just make sure this guy does the same.”

            Two days later and Peter already had work. The fact that he could market a full crew with security detachment had helped. And what a deal it was. A high ranking astrogator had wanted to meet with him and his security chief (Peter was still not sure how Balder felt about the title) immediately. Both Peter and Balder ensured they were decked out in their finest attire. Peter sported a formal, black suit with a high mandarin collar, polished shoes, and his half-cloak of tiger fur draped over his right shoulder. Balder looked every inch the professional in a light tan collared shirt and pants, tan sports jacket, tie, and pristine suede combat boots.
It wasn’t everyday one was given a personal audience with an astrogator scion.
            The man seated across from the two Sternvolke was sickly thin. Emaciated would have been a better word, like the victim of some terrifying holocaust. His pale, bald scalp was dotted with contact nodes, and his eyes were jade green, the low light in the room picking up on flecks in those ominous orbs. But, for all the man’s apparent weakness, he exuded power and confidence. This was Brandt Krueger von Luedeker, a scion of the vaunted von Luedeker Astrogator House. The von Luedeker House held considerable sway in both the politics of the community fleet and the solar system as a whole. Any thoughts of crossing this man died instantly.
            “Thank you for meeting on such short notice,” Brandt rasped, his voice hoarse from decades of connectivity. “My family is in deep anguish, Herr Drexel.”
            “It is not a problem, your eminence,” Peter replied respectfully. “What seems to be the problem?”
            The astrogator leaned forward in his chair, resting his hands on the opulent mahogany desk before him.
            “It is my daughter,” Brandt said, tapping a few buttons on the desk’s pristine finish.
            Immediately an inlaid screen presented a picture of a stunning young woman, her white-blond hair falling to her shoulders, intense green eyes, a gift from her father’s genetic legacy, staring back at them.
            She looked vaguely familiar, though Peter couldn’t put his finger on it.
            “Her name is Amelia,” the scion continued. “She is my only daughter. Several days ago she ran away, as idealistic children do at times. From what my agents tell me she fled the community fleet and took a commercial shuttle to the surface to Olympus Mons.”
            At the mention of the god-mountain Balder tensed a little. Only Peter seemed to notice as Brandt wheezed on.
            “If you choose to take this job, I will provide you with the grid coordinates of where she is most likely located. And, of course, I will pay a substantial sum.”
            “How much are we talking about,” Peter asked, attempting not to sound too excited.
            The astrogator’s eyes flicked up for a moment, the artificial, computer-part of the man’s brain processing the data. Half a moment later his eyes clicked back, piercing Peter and Balder with their ghastly glance.
            “Five hundred thousand,” Brandt said.
            “I believe that will be enough,” Peter said, fighting to maintain his composure. “Don’t worry, your eminence. We’ll find your daughter in no time.”
            Brandt thanked them, and House von Luedeker guards quickly whisked the two giddy Sternvolke out of the astrogator hold.
            Inside and out Peter was rejoicing. This was it, the start to his fortune and fame.
            “Easy money,” Peter cackled. “We’ll find this little tart and I will be well on my way to being rich.”
            Balder gave his new employer a side-long glance. “I just want to make sure you don’t forget us.”
            Peter waved off the big brute.
            “I would never forget a promise or a contract, Faltskog. You and your men will be paid handsomely for your work, don’t you worry.”
            Balder grunted and nodded.
            “I am curious, though,” Balder said. “Why didn’t the scion just send his own men down there? They have to be a thousand times more able than us.”
            “Martian governments get skittish when Sternvolke agents start running through their streets,” Peter replied. “Especially Olympus Mons. The Technocrats are jealous of their sovereignty and power. Best to send a small team of hired help so as not to draw attention.”
            “Makes sense,” Balder concurred. “So where to first?”
           
            The noble sat alone at his table. The pristine china and glittering cutlery placed perfectly for others, but only he was there, eating his kingly dinner by himself. Though light shined over the table, the rest of the room was dark, reinforcing his solitude. It was a bleak existence Lord Phillip Red Firster lived, or so he thought. At the age of forty he had neither wives nor heirs. Other Olympian Technocrats had married by now, normally to two or three spouses (his friend Lord Eustice Landerson had five wives!). But here he was, the last of the Firster line, not a woman to be seen.
            It’s not that he didn’t like women. On the contrary, he loved the opposite sex. But his desire for Olympian women, or even the ladies of Mars itself, was lacking.
            Lord Phillip Red Firster desired an astrogatress bride.
            He had been addicted to the fantasy since he was an adolescent and a delegation of the Star Folk visited his home. In the retinue of the visiting official were two of the most beautiful fays he had every laid eyes on. They were magnificent. So serene and ephemeral. Each movement so careful yet purposeful. Their sublime beauty mesmerized him.
            But no astrogatress would have him. They were all stuck up on their community ships, or aloof of normal human dealings. So there he was, lonely and longing.
            He almost missed the telltale swish of the door behind him and the lighter-than-air steps that passed through it.
            “I know you’re there, Archibald,” Firster grumbled.
            Firster’s head agent stepped into the light and bowed apologetically. “I meant no disrespect, your Lordship. I merely did not want to disturb your meal.”
            Firster waved off the House master agent. “No harm done, Archibald. What news do you have for me tonight?”
            “Engineerson is planning to push forward with his petition against us over the territorial dispute.”
            Firster snorted. “That young jackass needs to learn his place. He’s not as powerful as his mother was. I’ll see the bastard in court over it.”
            Archibald nodded and then continued. “The Star Folk community fleet has been in orbit for a week now. Their people are expanding into the different Martian states with their regular enthusiasm.”
            Nodding, Firster continued to eat. “Might be good to hire some logistics assets from them. Help move House Firster products.”
            “Indeed,” Archibald agreed. “There is a bit of news you may be interested in, my Lord.”
            “Oh?” Firster said, cocking an eyebrow, but only half interested. “Well, out with it man.”
            “It seems the daughter of a high ranking astrogator has run away and is somewhere on Olympus Mons.”
            Firster’s eyes widened, and the House master agent could see the gears in his Lord’s head beginning to work in overdrive.
            “That’s terrible,” the middle-aged Technocrat exclaimed.
            “The young woman’s father has already hired a man to find her. Some Star Folk captain and his thugs.”
            Tapping a finger to his chin, Firster ran through the possibilities. He was planning, and Archibald felt very sorry for anyone involved in his Lord’s plots.
            “Follow this captain and his people,” Firster said slowly. “Keep me updated on where they go and what they find. If anyone can find this little lost astrogatress, they can. And we will be poised to take her from them.”
            “They will resist.” Archibald stated.
            Firster gave his master agent a cruel smile. “And we will deal with them.”

            With their first job on Mars instead of half way across the solar system, Peter left most of his crew on the Loki in order to complete maintenance and set up of the well used craft (trusting them not to jump ship and abscond with anything). The vivacious, taught shuttle pilot, Berget Sondheim, transported the rest of the group to the surface – including Amelia.
            “Why do you require my assistance, Herr Kapitän?” she asked, a little nervously.
            “You’re a brain…er, astrogatress, much like our target, Ms. Hahn. You may have some insight into what she’s thinking or where she may go.”
            “And where might that be?” she asked.
            The Sternvolker captain shrugged. “Hell if I know. I’m not one of you. Where do your spoiled princesses go to hide when they’re mad at daddy?”
            Amelia’s pride was pricked just then, and she almost let it bubble over. But she realized that Peter wasn’t talking about her. Amelia nodded thoughtfully.
            “I see your point, Herr Kapitän,” she feigned to agree. “Where were some of the places our target’s father identified?”
            Peter lifted his PDP and brought up the mapped locations.
            “First stop is the Librarium Maximus Olympus Mons,” Peter stated. “Largest library in the solar system. Her father says she adores books.”
            Amelia’s heart shot into her throat. All her life Amelia had dreamed of visiting the immense library. Who would have guessed her clandestine adventures would lead her there? Unknown to Amelia a broad smile had plastered itself on her face.
            “It looks like someone else enjoys such places,” Balder quipped, a warm grin on his scarred features.
            “Oh, well, yes,” Amelia admitted. “Ever since I was little I have always enjoyed reading and learning. I have always longed to visit the Librarium. I was always too busy with my astrogatress training, though.
            For the briefest of moments, Peter let slip a genuine smile. It was nothing big, nothing gaudy or outlandish. It was just a small grin, but, somehow, it drew Amelia closer to this rogue.
            “I’ve actually been there,” Peter admitted, almost whispering it. “When I was ten my father enrolled me there. The fleet was visiting Mars at the time, and he thought it would be good for me to be at a real center of knowledge and learning.”
            Amelia’s eyes and mouth widened.
            “Your father must have been very caring to give you such an opportunity.”
            Peter gave a gruff laugh.
            “He’s a stubborn ass,” Peter barked. “When I told him I was going on a Pilgrimage he about disowned me. Told me it was a waste of my life.”
            Amelia’s eyes turned downward. “My father is also quite cross with me, Herr Kapitän. He…does not agree with my choices. But it is my life, and I plan to live it as I see fit.”
            Peter chuckled a bit. “Strong willed for such a lower class astrogatress.” He smiled another pure, real smile, and Amelia felt her knees turn to jelly (she was glad she was sitting). “It’s sexy.”
            She felt the blood rush to her face at the blatant come on and she was at a loss for words.
            “Um..” was all she managed.
            “Two minutes until landing,” Berget’s throaty voice called.
            The seven Sternvolke locked in their five-point crash harnesses and prepared for touchdown. The five mercs rapidly checked their weapons with swift, efficient movements. Each sported a compact sub-machine gun, save for Eyolf, who cradled his combat shotgun as lovingly as a mother cradles her child. The Wolf gave Peter a snarling grin.
            “Solid slug, sir,” Eyolf said, hefting his shotgun. “It’ll be too easy to bust open locks and burst chests.”
            Peter gave the wily man an equally feral smile.
            “Let’s hope it doesn’t come to that,” Peter said. “But, if it does, you’ll be the first I call.”
            The shuttle – an older, rugged Raptor model that Peter picked up from a military excess auction – settled down on the landing pad with a light thump and hiss of landing gear. With a huff of hydraulics, the rear hatch lowered and the Sternvolke released their bindings.
            “Ms. Sondheim,” Peter said as he exited the craft. “Stay with the shuttle. Keep her warmed up and ready to go at a moment’s notice.”
            The lean, fit Berget, her chorded muscles rippling as she moved, gave Peter a smart salute.
            “Jawohl, Herr Kapitän.”

            A brisk monorail ride from the spaceport brought the seven to the Librarium. It was local morning, the sun just peaking over the horizon, splashing everything with bright yellow light. A cool wind was whipping up the side of the gargantuan, extinct volcano that the Olympians called home, and Peter relished the feel on his face.
            “So much better than reprocessed air,” he said.
            “Thinking of leaving the fleet, sir?” Balder asked. “Going to go mud-sucker on your fellow Sternvolke?”
            “Not quite,” Peter replied. “But the constant travel to planets and moons will brighten my mood considerably. Besides, where’s there’s breathable, natural air, there’s people. And where there’re people, there’s money.”
            Peter and his hired retinue scaled the tall steps of the Librarium Maximus Olympus Mons, and slowly entered the vaulted doors. Most structures in the solar system were built with the environment in mind. They would be built using the most energy conserving materials and electrical equipment, and, when needed, could be rapidly disassembled or reconfigured. The Librarium, on the other hand, was a solid, unmoving stone structure meant to last until time itself ended. It’s awesome size dwarfed many of the larger industrial and commercial buildings surrounding it. Within its crenellated interior, the library held millions of books, documents, and records. Anything from one year ago to a millennium prior could be accessed within the massive Librarium.
            “Old memories,” Peter whispered.
            “Did you say something, sir?” Borge Selvik asked.
            “Nothing, trooper,” Peter said. “Just admiring the architecture.”
            They entered the mighty construct and were immediately taken aback. The entire building was filled to the brim with old-style parchment books, both paperback and hard cover. Down the long aisles stood dozens of exquisite statues of ancient heroes and heroines, gods and goddesses from every pagan pantheon, historical figures from both ancient Earth and Mars’ past, and mighty Technocrats that had ruled on the god-mountain. Beneath the feet of these great men and women were the data stacks where the library’s vast digital database was stored. Sword tips, books, fingers, or finely sculpted birds held the network transmitters that allowed patrons to access the Librarium’s knowledge wirelessly.
            Amelia was dumbstruck. It was more magnificent than she could have ever imagined. Here, in this one place, was more knowledge than she could process in three lifetimes, even with her cybernetic implants. How she longed to ply the library database and just read and process for hours and hours. It was incredible.
            “Faltskog,” Peter ordered. “I want you and your men to spread out. Each of you has a picture of the girl we’re looking for. Keep in regular contact with me either via radio or data pad.”
            “Aye sir,” Balder acknowledged.
            “Ms. Hahn,” Peter said, turning to his astrogatress. “You’re coming with me.”
            “Yes, Herr Kapitän.”
            As they went their separate ways, Peter brought the picture of his target up on his PDP. He couldn’t place his finger on it, but she looked so very familiar.
            “Are you coming, Herr Kapitän?” Henrietta asked.
            Peter stared at her a moment…then dismissed the thought. There were too many differences.
            “Let’s find this lost little girl,” Peter said.
           
            Lord Firster stared at his thirty centimeter personal data pad. Economic information of the family businesses, and local and international news scrawled across the wafer-thin screen. In the center of the display was his personal mail, and a very promising message was highlighted:
To: Firster, Phillip Red
From: Harrington, Archibald
My Lord,
The subjects have made landfall. Their search has begun, but no sure leads. Will continue to update.
-Archibald
This was it. These Star Folk would lead him to his prize. He could almost feel the warmth of the astrogatress’s body. Firster calmed himself and forced his mind to think. How could he speed up the process? The sooner he found his prize, the sooner he could be rid of these Star Folk scum and bargain with the astrogatress’ family.
            “There are just too few of them,” Firster exclaimed as he reviewed the pics that Archibald’s men had captured.
            Seven Star Folk to find a lone astrogatress on Olympus Mons. The god-mountain itself, not including outlying territories, boasted a population of two million. It was a lot of work and would take a lot of time.
            Time that Firster did not have.
            “How will they ever be able to find her by themselves?” he mumbled.
            And then it hit him.
            In a flash of inspiration he began typing furiously on his PDP.

            Peter had been wandering the halls of the Librarium for four hours, and his target was nowhere in sight. He and Henrietta did startle a Technocrat prince and princess in a secluded study area. The young woman scurried out, clothes half off, her face flush from being discovered. The young man hadn’t known what to do.
            “Next time,” Peter suggested. “Lock the door.”
            “Children,” Henrietta stated. “Always finding ways into trouble.”
            Peter chuckled. “Memories.”
            “Am I to believe that you, Herr Kapitän, swept unsuspecting ladies off to dark places for some face time?”
            “Oh, a few,” Peter admitted. “Though I doubt any of them were unsuspecting. I remember one who was actually the instigator…she was a little wild.”
            It was Henrietta’s turn to giggle. “How am I supposed to follow such an uncouth ship captain?”
            Peter gave her a feral grin. “C’mon, Ms. Hahn, I’m sure you’ve had your share of wild rendezvous in your time. Astrogators have needs, too.”
            “W-what?” Henrietta stammered. “N-no! I would never…I mean…that is…”
            She sputtered into a fuming silence.
            “I won’t tell anyone,” Peter said slyly.
            For a moment it seemed like the astrogatress wouldn’t budge.
            “When I was seventeen,” she finally divulged. “He was two years older than me. We made out behind a set of pipes in an access corridor.”
            “Made out?”
            “That is it,” Henrietta said, emphasizing with a chop of her small, alabaster hand. “Nothing more.”
            “My my,” Peter said. “Such a wild child. What next? Going to show off a bit of ankle?”
            This forced a small smile from the still pouting Henrietta.
            Both of them giggled quietly as they rounded the corner of a shelf of books – and ran right into Balder.
            “You two seem to be having a good time,” Balder said.
            Peter’s face transformed back to an emotionless façade.
            “Anything?” he asked his hired muscle.
            The giant shook his large, bald cranium.
            “Nothing, sir. My men on the other side of the Librarium report the same. Were she here, I think we would have spotted her already.”
            Peter nodded acknowledgement.
            “Alright, have your people meet us at the entrance. We’ll head to the next suspected location.”
            Balder was about to radio Borge and Eyolf when half a dozen men surrounded the five Sternvolke.
            “Friends of yours?” Peter asked the powerful Stallari.
            “I was about to ask you the same question,” Balder snorted.
            “Ms. Hahn?”
            Henrietta shook her head vigorously, her eyes wide with fear.
            There was a moment of tense anticipation, the Sternvolke awaiting the first move of the Olympians. Peter’s hands slowly drifted to his hip-holstered .45 caliber pistol, and Balder, Ragnar, and Asbjorn held their fingers just short of their weapons’ triggers. Weaponless, Henrietta cowered behind Peter.
            “Mr. Drexel,” one of the Martians – a tall, non-descript man – asked.
            “Yes?” Peter answered cautiously.
            “We mean you no harm,” the man said, showing empty hands. “Our Lord has invited you to his manor. He heard about your search and wishes to assist you.”
            Peter wasn’t sure why, but something felt very wrong about all of this.

            “Thank you so much for coming,” Lord Phillip Red Firster announced as Peter and his hired team walked into his broad, opulent office in the Firster Manor. “I learned of the disappearance of one of your illustrious people and was moved to lend my aid.”
            Though he felt very uncomfortable with everything, Peter nodded respectfully.
            “Thank you, your Lordship.”
            “Please, no thanks are needed,” Firster reassured the Star Folk captain. “It is my duty as a Technocrat to do the right thing. Please, be seated.”
            At a signal from Firster, two servants swept in, quickly and quietly, and served the group tea, crackers, and cold cuts; all beautifully decorated to give it an air of refinement.
            “So then,” Firster began as he sipped his tea. “What can you tell me about this young woman?”
            “She’s an astrogatress,” Peter said. “Noble born. Her father believes she ran away in a rebellious temper tantrum.”
            Firster smiled knowingly. “Such is the way with youth. I remember when I was younger I got angry with my father about one thing or another and took off for a few days myself. I’m sure she’s come to her senses by now and is scared out of her mind.”
            Peter’s stone faced expression never warmed.
            “Do you have any idea where she is?” Firster continued.
            “Her father gave us a few ideas,” Peter let on. “That’s why we were searching the Librarium. Other places were social gatherings, the Astrogator quarter, and Chateau Street.”
            Firster’s head shot up. “Chateau Street?”
            “I guess she’s an artsy type. Chateau Street is supposed to be a big independent artists’ alcove, isn’t it?”
            “It’s also very dangerous,” Firster said darkly.
            “Why’s that?” Balder asked. “A bunch of wayward painters and poets can’t be too bad.”
            “It’s a major drug trafficking hub,” Firster replied. “Both local law enforcement and Technocrat House Troops get caught up in fire fights there often.”
            Peter and Balder shot one another worried looks.
            “No one goes there without heavy fire support,” Firster continued. “The artists keep to themselves. The drug runners will shoot you if you even walk funny.”
            Eyolf gave the Technocrat Lord an ominous, hungry grin.
            “Don’t worry, your Lordship,” The Wolf growled. “We excel in heavy fire support.”

            They had agreed to search Chateau Street the next morning, both Peter and his mercenaries along with Firster and his House agents. Why Firster, a high ranking noble in his own right, volunteered to go was beyond Peter’s comprehension, but he wasn’t going to question the extra help. Especially if it meant collecting his paycheck quicker. Peter and his people returned to the space port hotel for the night. Balder and his mercenaries were especially excited to get back, and the Stallari promised his new employer a great show the following morning.
            Peter was worn to the bone. His circadian rhythm was set for zulu time, but Olympus Mons followed the Martian time zones, and the two did not marry up. He had been awake for over forty hours, and his body begged for some good sleep. Once he had made contact with Zoryn Revnik and Josef Hannover on the Loki (they hadn’t run off after all), Peter walked to the spacious, sectioned off hotel room he shared with Henrietta. As he entered, Peter stumbled upon his new astrogatress, half naked in the bathroom.
            “Oh, Ms. Hahn,” Peter exclaimed. “I’m sorry, I didn’t…”
            The words died on his lips as the woman turned her head. Something was suddenly very wrong. Her hair was no longer chocolate brown, instead a shimmering platinum blond. And her eyes, once plain, dull brown, were now intense jade jewels in wide, white orbs.
            Peter’s vocal chords failed to work as he realized exactly who Henrietta Hahn really was.
            “I can explain,” Amelia ventured as she zipped up her white spacer suit.
            “You!” was all he could manage.
            “Look, I know you are angry…”
“You are five hundred thousand marks, sitting right there in front of me the whole time!”
Amelia gave the Sternvolker captain a dark look. “Oh, am I? Is that the price my father is paying you to find me.”
“Yes!” Peter exclaimed. “It is!”
“I am a human being,” Amelia shot back. “I am not some paycheck.”
“To me you are.”
            The statement was like a slap in the face to Amelia. “Really? That is all I am?”
            “Yup.”
            “How dare you!”
            “How dare I?” Peter roared. “I haven’t done anything wrong! How dare you! This little adventure could have been over this morning, and I’d be half a million marks richer.”
            Fists clenched, Amelia glared at Peter. “Did you ever stop to think that I did not want to go back?”
            “Nope. Never crossed my mind.”
            “Well I do not want to!” Amelia practically screamed. “I hate my life. I hate how my father tries to pawn me off to all of the other young men in our Astrogator House. Everything is so political, everyone’s feelings so fake. I want my own life, dammit!
            “Does that not mean anything to you?”
            Peter was about to return with a snide remark – and stopped. It did mean something to him. Wasn’t everything he was doing – leaving his family, buying a ship, hiring a crew, going off on a Pilgrimage – the same as Amelia leaving her home? They both had something to prove, something they wanted to get away from. For Peter it was more than just his overbearing parents. It was the status quo he lived in. And, as he stood there, studying his astrogatress and target, he realized she felt the same way.
            “Yes,” Peter admitted after a moment. “I mean, I don’t understand how you could hate your life. You live in luxury. On community ships where space is at a premium, astrogators and astrogatresses like you live in large suites that could hold three families and want for nothing. Good education, good employment.”
            “But it is pointless,” Amelia returned. “Every day I am hand-fed everything. There are no challenges, no meaning to life. Everyone cares only for themselves and their advancement. Even my father does not care for me. I might as well be cattle for his use.”
            Peter nodded. “My parents mean well, but they don’t let me live my life. I have dozens of people telling me I’ll fail, that I’ll never amount to anything. They think I should just roll over and die, to follow the heard and live my life according to their rules.”
            “Please,” Amelia begged her captain. “Do not turn me in.”
            Peter stared at her for a moment, his emotions warring inside.
            A knock came at the door of the hotel room.
            “Sir?” came the deep, rumbling voice of Balder.
            Amelia’s sparkling green eyes begged with Peter.
            “Yes?”
            “Just letting you know that my men and I are ready. We’ll meet you by the storage units tomorrow morning. Is there anything else you need?”
            Peter paused, and time dragged on for an eternity for Amelia.
            “No,” the Sternvolker Captain finally replied. “We’re good for tonight. See you tomorrow morning.”
            The two stared at each other for a long while, ship captain and astrogatress.
            “Thank you,” said Amelia, breaking the silence.
            “Just don’t make me regret it,” Peter replied.

            The next morning – after Amelia had refreshed her disguise – Peter and Amelia made the five minute trek to the space port storage units. It was one hundred Olypmian Gelder a night, or one hundred fifty Sternvolke Marks, to rent a storage unit on the space port grounds. Peter damned the exchange rate as he and Amelia strode towards the block that he had leased for Balder. The immense mercenary and his small command were waiting patiently, the four subordinate warriors lined up in perfect parade formation at parade rest, the Stallari standing proudly before them.
            “This had better be good, Faltskog,” Peter warned.
            The broad smile never left Balder’s bearded face.
            “Trust me, sir,” Balder reassured his employer. “You will be more than pleased. What I’m about to show you will make our search of Chateau Street that much easier.”
            Amelia tensed just then. Peter could tell the mercs that their prize was right there, just waiting to be whisked back to her father’s keep. They wouldn’t have to go to any of the trouble or place themselves in unneeded danger.
            But Peter remained silent.
            Balder spun smartly and nodded to his men. In short order they parted, and the door to the storage unit whined open. The entrance clear, the lights within illuminated.
Peter’s mouth dropped.
“That’s…” he began.
“Five suits of Renegade-pattern power armor,” Balder finished for the dumbstruck captain. “Each a ton of composite armor and weaponry. One fifty-caliber machine gun in the right arm, a flamethrower in the left, and a shoulder-mounted micro-missile launcher. It turns a man into a small armored fighting vehicle.”
“No wonder you asked for so much in your contract,” Peter gasped.
“Trust me, sir, it was money well invested.”
“I should hope so, with suits that are a hundred thousand marks a piece.”
“Our plan,” said Balder, “is to use the suits to scan the surrounding area, and cover you and Henrietta.”
“I’ll have my own body armor,” Peter replied.
“Our armor is just slightly better.”
“Hm, good point.”
Peter gazed at the massive suits of power armor for a moment. Awe filled him. And jealousy - he needed to acquire a suit for himself one of these days.
Peter turned back to the five mercenaries. “Well, Stallari, suit up. We have an astrogatress to find.”

An hour later the seven Sternvolke dropped from the Raptor shuttle in a park a short distance from Chateau Street. People taking leisurely walks and enjoying quiet picnics immediately scattered at the sight of military-grade armor. The sky that day was dreary and gray, the clouds above pregnant with rain.
“Bad omen,” Eyolf commented.
“Everything’s a bad omen to you,” Borge chided.
Lord Firster and his men were at the designated rally point. All of his men wore heavy power armor.
“Quite a sight,” noted Firster as Balder and his team trudged forward. “It’s been some time since I’ve seen the Star Folk ready for war.”
“The same could be said for your soldiers,” Peter said, nodding towards the twelve House Firster troops.
“Older Zeus suits,” Firster explained. “But sturdy designs with the latest upgrades. Each suit is a ton and a half, a sub machine gun in each arm, and those cannons over each shoulder are eighty-millimeter recoilless rifles.”
Peter swallowed hard. “Excellent.”
“We should have no problems with the local drug runners that call Chateau Street home.”
Peter nodded in agreement – but suddenly it wasn’t the drug smugglers he was worried about.
The search began immediately, both Balder’s men and the House Firster soldiers going door by door, street by street, searching for the lost astrogatress. Most residents were used to such searches, and answered questions from the armored troopers as if it was just another day. Some were too stoned, and were less than helpful. At one household, Peter encountered two very pretty young women with too many happy pills and not enough clothing.
“Focus on the mission, sir,” Balder’s voice boomed over the external loudspeaker in his armor, the smile plain in his voice.
“I’m focusing on the money,” Peter replied. “But I know where to come back to when we’re finished.”
Both men chuckled as they thanked the two girls and moved to the next building.
All the while Amelia was visibly tense. As the two groups worked the area, Amelia was linking into the local net, searching for anything about the disappearance of an astrogatress. There was none, obviously, but Peter kept her looking to keep up pretenses. So far, nothing had gone wrong.
And then it started to rain.
It was light at first, just a few patters here and there as the armored troops moved down the broad drag. In moments, though, the sagging cloud cover released a deluge of heavy rain, covering everything in moments.
“Ms. Hahn,” Firster exclaimed as the little astrogatress quickly became drenched. “You really should…”
Then he noticed something very strange. Right before his eyes, Henrietta Hahn’s hair was losing its color, the rain revealing white blond strands hiding under the deep, rich brown. In moments her hair was devoid of color – and Firster was furious.
There was a moment of dead silence, only the chatter of rain obstructing the quiet that had fallen over everyone.
Then everything went to hell.
“That’s her!” Firster exclaimed, his voice cracking as he stabbed a finger towards Amelia. “There is the astrogatress! Get her! Bring her to me!”
The world devolved into a whirlwind of battle. As a House Firster soldier moved to grab Amelia, Peter, shot in front of her and pelted the man’s face plate with a hail of bullets from his sub-machine gun. Three of the soldiers moved to stop Peter, and Balder emitted a wordless bellow of rage, expending a micro missile into their midst. One man was killed instantly, the rocket exploding on his chest armor. The trooper’s two comrades were rocked back, their electronics shaken by the explosion. Borge, Eyolf, Ragnar, and Asbjorn charged forward, loosing a wall of leaden death into the Firster ranks.
But Lord Firster’s men were trained professionals. In moments they had moved to cover their liege lord and were belting eighty millimeter rounds out of their recoilless rifles. The Sternvolke were hard pressed to move out of the way before they were pummeled to mush by the onslaught. With a hail of covering fire, Peter and his newly hired crew members raced through Chateau Street. Recoilless rounds sang over their heads, exploding onto the street and building facades.
“Did you know who she was?” Balder exclaimed, launching another missile in the direction of their erstwhile allies.
“Yes,” Peter admitted over the din, adding his weapon to the fight.
“Why didn’t you tell us?”
“I thought you’d turn her in.”
“I’m a mercenary,” Balder shot back. “Not a robot.”
“I’ll remember that next time.”
Two miles later Chateau Street ended. Peter had no idea where they were on the god-mountain, only that they needed to escape Firster and his men. Further and further the seven Star Folk ran into the streets and alleys of Olympus Mons, all the while battling for their lives. All around them people were evacuating businesses and homes. An outdoor shopping mall quickly devolved into chaos as hundreds of people dropped their umbrellas and rushed to escape the impacting artillery. The local law enforcement could do little more than protect the panicking citizens, shielding them and directing them to safety. Two police officers, though wearing full body armor, were killed covering the escape of a dozen people.
“They’re gaining on us!” Ragnar exclaimed as he poured dozens of rounds into the oncoming Firster troops.
“Sir, we can’t hold out much longer,” Balder exclaimed, firing from the cover of a building corner.
“Well,” Peter said. “It was nice to work with you while it lasted.”
Balder nodded in his suit. “And you, sir.”
Lord Phillip Firster and the remaining eight men of his retinue were a mere hundred meters distant, and closing fast. Their rate of fire forced the seven Sternvolke into cover, barely giving them room to return fire.
“Kill them!” Firster yelled maniacally. “And bring me the astrogatress alive. She’s mine!”
All seemed lost.
Suddenly, above the din of combat and the torrential rains, came an earth shattering crash, as if their air itself had been cut. Two of Firster’s men were immediately vaporized, the others searching for the source of this unseen attacker.
Then the ground shook.
Windows wobbled at the power of the mini-quakes. Somewhere personal vehicle alarms were triggered. Another crash, and the source of such awesome power came into view.
It was a Colossus. The epitome of Martian military technology, Colossi were bipedal war machines bristling with lasers, cannon, and missiles. The stocky machine strode forward like an armored knight, confident in its superiority. Its boxy arms ended in weapons pods, the muzzles of power guns jutting down the street.
The air was sliced once more, ruby beams of energy stabbing out to spear another Firster trooper.
Around the Colossus’ feet swarmed dozens of armored infantry. These men and women boasted power armor larger again than Firster’s Zeus suits. Titan-pattern power armor, two tons of raw power, loped down the road, the twin missile launchers on their backs bobbing as they ran. The left arm ended in a powerful robotic claw, while the right was extended into the suit’s main weapon: a man-pack laser. Very few in the solar system boasted such compact technology, and only the most powerful Technocrats could field the weapons – and, subsequently, guarded them jealously.
Above the immense ground force hovered a single gun-ship. It was larger than Peter’s little Raptor shuttle, and the swiveling chin-cannons and myriad rocket launchers marked it a powerful craft indeed. It was the single eye superimposed between crossed broadswords that caught Peter’s attention.
“Your family’s here,” Peter said, turning to Amelia.
“I know,” she said, her voice quiet.
The Colossus stopped then, pointing its gun mounts directly at Lord Firster and the four men of his body guard that remained.
“Lord Phillip Red Firster,” a voice boomed from a loud speaker. “This is Lord Horatio Engineerson. You are encroaching on my legal territory, have killed residents under my protection, and you are attempting to harm an astrogatress of one of my entrusted trading partners. Stand down now!”
Firster hurled insults towards the massive machine, but to little effect. His retinue, afraid to die but not wanting to disobey their Technocratic Lord, held their ground to protect him. The Titan-clad troopers inched forward, the barrels of their lasers trained on Firster and his men.
“She’s mine, dammit!” Firster raged. “I was going to have her. Me! I won’t let you take her away!”
“Last warning, Firster,” Engineerson barked over the speaker.
Firster ordered his men to attack. It was the last order he would ever give.
Twin ruby beams bore into where Firster and his men stood. One moment they were there, the next they were no more.
At an unheard command the House troops moved forward, securing the area in order to protect Engineerson’s economic holdings.
“Little Star Folk,” Horatio Engineerson’s voice called in Peter’s ear. “It seems we all have some discussing to do.”

Peter had to admit, Lord Horatio Engineerson’s manor was incredible. Though Peter was sure it was nicer than Firster’s, it also betrayed a sort of simplicity about it. Horatio sat at the head of his corporate meeting table, the polished Olypmian redwood reflecting all present like a mirror. Around Engineerson stood his three beautiful wives, each dressed in very professional, sharp business suits. Peter, Amelia, Balder and the four other mercenaries sat to Horatio’s right.
Scion Brandt Krueger von Luedeker sat to his left.
            Peter felt the powerful astrogator stab him with his hateful glare across the table. Next to Brandt was a frail woman of fair complexion and immense beauty – Amelia identified her as Serena Krueger von Luedeker, her mother. Behind the couple stood four, very dangerous looking House von Luedeker body guards.
            Peter had explained everything, from his Pilgrimage and hiring of his crew, all the way up to where Engineerson had intervened. All the while the astrogator Scion’s expression darkened further.
            “So,” Horatio said after Peter had completed his talk. “Let me get this straight. The damage to my commercial district could have been avoided had you just admitted that Amelia was with you all along?”
            Peter paused for a moment, the picture of the two law enforcement officers being killed by a recoilless round. At least the Technocrat hadn’t mentioned loss of life, too.
            “Yes,” Peter said finally.
            Engineerson studied the young Sternvolker for a long, hard moment, his analytical mind processing everything it observed.
            “Well,” the Lord replied. “Though there is some damage, it is repairable. And, while it irks me that it was Firster, I had a legal reason to kill the worthless bastard. I guess I should thank you then, Drexel. With Firster dead, and no heirs of his own, I will take over his territories here on Olympus Mons. My stocks are expected to jump a bit.”
            “I’m glad I could help,” Peter said.
            “There is the issue of my daughter,” Brandt cut in. “An issue that is not reconciled.”
            Amelia, who had been silent the entire time, suddenly spoke up.
            “I will not return, father,” the petite astrogatress said forcefully.
            “Yes…” Brandt began to hiss.
            No!” Amelia reiterated. “I will not. I am twenty-four, and I can make my own decisions. I am sick of the politics you play and the way you treat me like I am some livestock to be traded. I will not have it. I will stay on with Peter’s crew. And if you do not like it…well…then you can go fry your own circuits.”
            Peter was amazed at the power behind Amelia’s voice.
            Brandt was not.
            “How dare you speak to me in such a way, child!” he roared. “I will disown you! I will cut you off from everything you have ever known!”
            “Do it!” Amelia cried back. “At least I will be able to live my life the way I see fit!”
            Brandt was about to challenge his daughter, when Serena placed a dainty, alabaster hand on her husband’s arm. It was like a change from night to day as Brandt suddenly calmed down. He took his seat, but it was obvious he was still perturbed.
            “Amelia,” Serena whispered. “It is not that we do not want you to be happy. We do. But you are our daughter and we fear for you.”
            “I understand,” Amelia replied. “But I must be free to make my own choices and define myself by my accomplishments, not live under your shadows. I want to experience the solar system on my terms. It is not that I want to disrespect or dishonor you. I want to show you the woman I have become. I want you to be proud of me.”
            Brandt and Serena looked at one another. The room was quiet for a long moment – Horatio Engineerson was obviously bored with the family talk as he quietly putzed away on his PDP. The silence dragged on for what seemed like an eternity. Then, Brandt nodded at Serena, and she kissed her husband’s cheek.
            “Alright, Amelia,” Brandt said, his voice almost caring. “We understand. We will not interfere anymore.”
            Amelia smiled. “Thank you, father. I will not disappoint you.”
            The meeting was adjurned. Horatio and Brandt shook hands and promised great things in the future between their two noble Houses. As the gathering parted, Brandt waved Peter over.
            “Though I would have preferred you tell me of my daughter’s status, Herr Drexel,” Brandt began, “I am indebted to you for fighting to protect her.”
            “She’s one of my crew, your eminence,” Peter stated bluntly. “I would never intentionally allow harm to come to her.”
            “Let us see that you do not,” Brandt returned. “I am putting a lot of trust in your hands, Herr Drexel. No harm, intentional or otherwise, had better visit Amelia…or I will find you.”
            Peter swallowed hard. “Understood, your eminence.”
            “That said,” Brandt continued. “You did find my daughter…technically speaking. So, against my better judgment, I have paid you in full for your services.”
            Forgetting courtesy (Peter was too worn out to care) he brought up his bank account on his PDP. The figure that presented itself left the ship captain speechless.
            “Whoah. That’s a lot more than five hundred thousand.”
            “A down payment for taking care of my daughter,” Brandt rasped. “And remembering whom you have to answer to if you do not.”

            Amelia, Balder, Borge, Eyolf, Ragnar, and Asbjorn all waited anxiously outside the gates of the Engineerson estate. After what seemed like forever, Peter strode into their midst, confidence plastered on his white features.
            “So?” Eyolf asked. “Did we get paid?”
            Balder cuffed his subordinate.
            “What?” Eyolf exclaimed. “Can’t eat without money.”
            “Eyolf’s right,” Peter said. “And yes, we did. Although I think I missed something in there.”
            “Astrogator implants allow astrogators and astrogatresses to speak wirelessly,” Amelia explained. “And wordlessly.” She smiled. “How much did my father pay you?”
            “Too much,” Peter said, but the silly grin never left his face. “Enough to pay everyone and keep running until Pluto.”
            “Sounds good to me,” Borge said. “Will be nice to have some cash in my pocket.”
            “Indeed,” Balder agreed. “So, in light of everything that happened…”
            “I can safely say we have a crew,” Peter finished. “And an astrogatress to guide us.”
            “And a captain to lead us,” Amelia said.
            “So where to next?” Balder asked.
            Peter looked up into the darkening sky. The rain had stopped, the clouds dissipated. The plethora of reds, oranges, and violets that painted the sky as sunset drew the Martian day to a close was sublime and awe inspiring.
            “To wherever the black may take us.”